Kelly Abell Books

I just began working with my editor on my newest novel with kNight Romance Publishing.  Jewels of Hera has begun the editing journey and I wanted to share with you the pre-edit email I received from my editor.  I wish I'd had an email like this years ago so I hope it helps you.

Here's your manuscript. I need you to go through and search out the following words:

began to

started to

making

causing

like

as

then

and then

when

which

was

were

to be

had

went

put

Please reword the sentences where these words are found. They're considered weak words and our goal is to make your prose stronger. Now, if you run across these in dialog, no worries. Keep the flow natural. We speak these words everyday. But the rest gotta go.

Also, search out the conjunctives: for, and, nor, but, or, yet. Check to see if these words connect two complete sentences. If so, put a comma before the conjunctive. If not, leave it out.

Make sure all If-Then sentences have a comma. If the sentence starts with 'if', it has a comma where the 'then' would have been placed. Ex: If I'd known, then I would've done it. If I'd known, I would've done it.

Go through and correct:

Towards - should be toward

Forwards - should be forward

Backwards - should be backward

Please reword all sentences with semicolons by either breaking into two sentences, adding a conjunction, or rewording.

Please revise sentences with colons. Ex: Instead of He had one thing on his mind: sex. Change it to He had one thing on his mind. Sex. OR He had one thing on his mind—sex.

So there it is folks.  As I go through my manuscript, you begin going through yours BEFORE you send it to that agent or publisher.  This is not all the editing you will need, but it is a REALLY good start.  My thanks to Lauren, my editor.  I'm looking forward to working with you!

Until next time...